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RedMage'sHat
12-09-2004, 06:18 PM
You know i really liked the beginning of Nuklear Age i found it really fun and enjoyable to read, and despite what alot of people theought i found the pacing quit nice. But then the second half of the book, and by second half i mean anything after Atomic Lad and Nuklearman's trial, i found alittle rushed. It just seemed like everything after the trial was really rushed.

Ominous
12-23-2004, 12:51 AM
Looking back, there is a whole lotta stuff going on at the end -- I'd characterize the end as everything that happens after the final battle with Superion. I suppose it is rushed, but I was going for that. I wanted the reader to be inundated, just beaten mercilessly with events. But maybe I could've done that and made things more immediately clear by taking the occasional pause.
Although this only pertains to the very end, it still sort of answers your question.