guest comic

[byrd]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/byrd3790/guestcomic1.jpg http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c62/byrd3790/guestcomic2.jpg





what do yall think?

sorry i only have paint so i know the graphics arn't that good, but look at the plot of it and just let me know if its funny.

the script is

WM:HOLY FIRE only if the tn levels of hell where to freeze over.

BM: ok maybe i dserved that one... but what was that about a frozen hell?... this presents many possibilites... other eight senses here i come.


#2

BM: thank chaos for chloroform... OHH SWEET GODS OF EVIL IT HURTS
concious fading self narration gone BLARGH... hey Bitches im back hell is mine

LICH: CANT MOVE

KARY: this is too damn cold For a Fire demon

[ionozacuzo]

Chloroform doesn't actually do that. It kills you slowly with toxic fumes more than anything else, really.

[DarkCORN!]

Any particular reason its too small to read?
Also, having paint does not mean your graphics are crappy. Having no skill means they are crappy.

[Grandmaster_Skweeb]

There is a little thing called 'Tact' DC, try and use it. Theres no need to be an ass and he wasn't openly asking to be flamed about it.

Now, onto some constructive advice:
Study the panel layouts of popular webcomics, or better yet real comics for that matter, and look at the panel arrangement. Some use larger panels with a set picture to allow dialogue to flow. Some, like 8-bit theater, have a large page with sequential panels. It's really up to you to figure out how you want it done. Large comic for more panels or multiple pages with fewer panels.

Really can't say much on the humor value of what you created since it is so compressed.

[DarkCORN!]

I just noticed. That is a bunch of panels from 8-bit theatre panels with a few things edited and text added. Yeah. No credit.

[Meister]

There is a little thing called 'Tact' DC, try and use it. Theres no need to be an ass and he wasn't openly asking to be flamed about it.
Quoted for truth.

[ionozacuzo]

I think the American Idol shootdown is better for everyone in the longrun. If you want to make it in those audience-oriented activities, you'll have to take alot of criticism that people won't care to make constructive since they'll feel like you're the one wasting their time.

That said, you're lucky because we internet elves have alot of time on our hands anyways.

[byrd]

thank you grandmaster skweeb. and dark corn you are right thats exactly what did only because i am a horrid artist but the idea is mine, and also the reason they are so small is because i couldnt find a way to make them larger. which is also why i wrote what was said underneath.

[gurusloth]

So, I don't mean to be a downer or anything, but if you don't even have enough artistic beads to string together to manipulate sprites, and you don't have the software knowledge necessary to resize digital images....maybe doing online sprite comics might be a bit beyond your reach.

Also, I couldn't really follow the plot. Why is WM casting Holy Fire? Why is BM getting chloroform used on him? Don't know.

[Loyal]

Well, from what little I could read of the comic (Photobucket seems to like resizing everything under the sun, ¬_¬), BM used it on WM to do... that thing he always wants to do. He then gets his usual treatment for the attempt of such, followed by extra pain for actually doing it.

That's from what I can make out. I could be wrong.

[byrd]

the story i had "hoped" to relay was. BM asked WM something and it was extra nasty so she got mad hit him with holy fire, whilst screaming only if the ten levels of hell where to freeze over. this then gives BM an idea, he uses the chloroform on WM to do the "dirty deed" then kills himself, or try but just ends up bleeding to death. he then goes to hell (like he's gunna make it in heaven) where it is all frozen and reclaims what is rightfully his.

[gurusloth]

Well, I'd say that's a horrible plot. BM uses chloroform to knock out WM and, basically, rape her? What's funny about that?

[byrd]

have yo read this entir seris, BM thratens that on very many occasions, but i guess you dont laugh at those jokes then
and here he mentions using Chloroform directly
I got Accss to Chloroform (http://nuklearpower.com/daily.php?date=041218)

[Meister]

But he never actually does it.

[byrd]

true enough thats why it wouldnt have anythong to do w/ the actual comic