Niya Moon
05-27-2006, 05:35 PM
Ok This is my newest book that i am writing. i know that i suck at spelling, but i hope that you understand it enough that you like it. well here i go
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How was i to know that i was the chosen? How was i to know that on my birthday, my 18th birthday, taht i was to lose my virganity? ell i guess that i should start at the beginning.
I was at my house after my party when my boyfriend, Lou Ciferak, stopped by afterwards and took me out for a walk. He told me that he wanted to show me something very special to him. So as you guessed it, I went with him. He put his arm around me and i leaned against him as we walked.
I should have relised that something was way wrong when he took me to a dark cave. But i trusted Lou so much that i would have died for him if it was to save his life. BUt it wasent that what he had in mind, i t was much much worse.
When he took my hand and led me into the cave and took me to the very back to a smaller room. there was candles lit and a bed in there. i turned around and said, "Lou, what-"
"Shhh. Dont worry, Sarah, I wont hurt you." He walked up to me and pulled me into his arms and kissed me. I was reluctant at first, knowing what he waned, but when he took the kiss deeper i found that i allowed myself to be picked up and carried to the bed. He placed me down and took off his shirt and pants. I gasped ant his body, his skin was as pale as the moon, and though he had scars all on his arms, he had none on his torso. I reached up and ran my fingers down his toned chest. I felt him run his hands up my shirt and unhook my bra. He then slipped my shirt off and over my head. then he pulled down my skirt and underwhere. He looked at my body like he was looking at a choice peace of meat. thats probbaly why i started to feel uneasy.
"Lou, I-I-I-I'm not so sure about this..." He just looked at me with mis ice-blue eyes. As i looked into them I felt as if i was falling down a deep well.
S i fell i saw pictures rush past me. First there was a man walking down a long lonley road with no end in sight. And i knew that there never will be. Then a flash and a picture that will haunt me to the end of my days. A man standing before a cross, and when he turned around i saw his eyes had been burned out. He reached for me and i heard him wisper something. A something that i could still hear after i woke up,
"The Anti has come, so the end is near."
~so thats the first chapter of my newest book. hoped you like it. ill try to update soon ok?
I
How was i to know that i was the chosen? How was i to know that on my birthday, my 18th birthday, taht i was to lose my virganity? ell i guess that i should start at the beginning.
I was at my house after my party when my boyfriend, Lou Ciferak, stopped by afterwards and took me out for a walk. He told me that he wanted to show me something very special to him. So as you guessed it, I went with him. He put his arm around me and i leaned against him as we walked.
I should have relised that something was way wrong when he took me to a dark cave. But i trusted Lou so much that i would have died for him if it was to save his life. BUt it wasent that what he had in mind, i t was much much worse.
When he took my hand and led me into the cave and took me to the very back to a smaller room. there was candles lit and a bed in there. i turned around and said, "Lou, what-"
"Shhh. Dont worry, Sarah, I wont hurt you." He walked up to me and pulled me into his arms and kissed me. I was reluctant at first, knowing what he waned, but when he took the kiss deeper i found that i allowed myself to be picked up and carried to the bed. He placed me down and took off his shirt and pants. I gasped ant his body, his skin was as pale as the moon, and though he had scars all on his arms, he had none on his torso. I reached up and ran my fingers down his toned chest. I felt him run his hands up my shirt and unhook my bra. He then slipped my shirt off and over my head. then he pulled down my skirt and underwhere. He looked at my body like he was looking at a choice peace of meat. thats probbaly why i started to feel uneasy.
"Lou, I-I-I-I'm not so sure about this..." He just looked at me with mis ice-blue eyes. As i looked into them I felt as if i was falling down a deep well.
S i fell i saw pictures rush past me. First there was a man walking down a long lonley road with no end in sight. And i knew that there never will be. Then a flash and a picture that will haunt me to the end of my days. A man standing before a cross, and when he turned around i saw his eyes had been burned out. He reached for me and i heard him wisper something. A something that i could still hear after i woke up,
"The Anti has come, so the end is near."
~so thats the first chapter of my newest book. hoped you like it. ill try to update soon ok?